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29 September 2017
Just a little update to let you know what I've been doing recently – a lot of writing, in fact!
First off, 'Alisha Goes Back to Work' is turning into something much larger than I had originally intended, and I have decided to make it a full length novel to be published in the Twisted Needs area of my website (no publisher's restrictions on content there!)
I have also been developing a FemDom story which I hope Pink Flamingo Media will publish. This one is right out of left field for me, but I am finding it quite intriguing to explore how the shoe fits the other foot, so to speak.
So, simultaneously writing two completely different types of story has been a challenge, and very time consuming. They are both still a way off completion, but it won't benefit anyone if I rush them and put out sub-standard work.
That said, I have received a number of emails asking when I am going to produce something new, so to keep everyone interested, I am revisiting the free stories that I started a couple of years back. I will only be updating them chapter by chapter, but will endeavor to put something out every two to four weeks.
And I'm kicking off with 'Welcome to Redneck Country'. Please click the image below or just go to my website to read it for free.
Hope you enjoy it, and thanks for your patience,
12 March 2017
Wandering through the bathroom section of a department store recently, I encountered a display hot-tub half-filled with cold water, and standing nearby, a bored-looking salesgirl holding a few brochures. I discreetly observed her pale, almost schoolgirlish face framed by shoulder-length black hair, and her slender body, hidden under a baggy white t-shirt and red sweat pants. She was probably a college kid, earning a few bucks at the weekend, and she seemed oblivious to my presence as I covertly checked out her tight little ass.
Fully sympathizing with her lack of interest in the empty corner of the store, I found myself wondering how much busier it might have been had she been wearing a bikini, actually sitting in the hot tub! And what if she was in there against her will? Perhaps her angry boss had ordered her to show off her body as a punishment for her poor sales performance.
As I left the store, my filthy imagination began to kick in, and I tried to picture the look of shame on her cute face as a crowd of eager shoppers gathered around to watch her soaping her wet body.
By the time I got home, I had visualized an entire fantasy in which the wretched girl is forced to advertise more and more store products in increasingly humiliating ways in front of the general public. What a delightfully titillating scenario!
So I came up with a name that seemed to fit this petite girl perfectly, and then added a set of circumstances whereby she would be at the mercy of a cruelly perverted store owner, set in a town populated by lecherous old men, jealous housewives, and horny teenagers:
Lily Drew is innocent, but nobody will believe her!
Convicted of a crime she didn’t commit, Lily is spared from serving jail time if she agrees to undertake two years of ‘supervised employment’ at a local department store. For sweet Lily, this sounds like a far better alternative than being locked up. Unfortunately for her, the owner of the store, Vic Benny, is not only an unscrupulous and ruthless individual, but also harbors unusually depraved sexual fantasies – and if Lily thinks her prayers have been answered by this arrangement, then Vic is about to ascend to a pervert’s heaven!
This 55,000 word novel includes the usual ingredients of a Lorenzo Marks non-consensual sex fantasy – voyeurism, public stripping, shaving, and forced exercise, to name just a few – focusing on the public humiliation of a timid young girl in front of an unsympathetic and lecherous audience made up from her very own community!
Click the image to read the first two chapters for free.
5 November 2016
Hi again! Thanks for your patience!
The fourth and final part of ‘Alisha is Sent to the Farm’is now available. To access the story, newsletter subscribers can go to the relevant Free
Stories page and enter the Free Stories master password. (This is also the same one you received for ‘The Principal’s Wife). If you are not yet a subscriber, then please sign up (the form is on the home page) and I will send you the password!
“Final, did you say?”
Yes, but fear not. Alisha’s trials and tribulations back in the city can be followed in my new and upcoming membership area:
The majority of my new work as well as continuations of current stories, will start appearing in this exclusive paid membership area too. It won’t be expensive, but by signing up, you will have access to new material that will not be available anywhere else on the internet. I will still be posting up teasers and opening chapters for free, but ‘needs must’ as they say, so all the really juicy stuff will be found here.
Details to follow. Look forward to seeing you there!
While we are on the subject of money, below is the link to my new Patreon account. Patreon is a crowdfunding platform for artists, musicians, writers, video makers, gamers, street performers, you name it. The idea is to help financially support your favorite creators in order to allow them more time and resources to create more and better work for their fans to enjoy. Sounds like a win-win situation to me!
Anyway, I am still building my creator page, and I am working on a little promo video for it, but I have already received my first pledge (thank you, Frank!) It is still early days but I would be grateful if you take a look when you have the time.
As always, I hope you enjoy reading about Alisha’s latest humiliations!
26 August 2016
So here I am, finally relocated on the island with the crystal clear ocean waves lapping just a few feet away from my front door! I have moved on from the trauma, eliminated all the mental clutter, and now it's time to deliver. (Yeah, yeah, I hear you say, promises, promises...)
Well, it hasn't been easy, but the creative juices are beginning to flow again, so here is the long awaited Part Nine of Annabel and Mr. Nash. I hope it works for you, and I really do appreciate your patience and loyalty. No passwords required this time because this episode will soon be out on the Literotica site anyway.
Stay tuned for more dirty stories, and as always, comments, suggestions, and criticisms, are all gratefully received.
11 June 2016.
I have been receiving a number of e-mails from fans wondering when I am going to put out more stories - understandably so, given the length of time since my last offering.
I just wanted to reassure everybody that I am still writing, and I am currently working on my latest novel along with the next installment of Annabel and Mr. Nash.
Unfortunately, with everything going on, writing time has (again) been frustratingly limited recently. The good news is that I shall soon be returning to the tropical island life, and my new part-time day job will free up much needed downtime that I can devote to my tales of depravity. So, all things being equal, output should increase over the remainder of the year.
I have plenty of new ideas too, and I have just finished the cover art for a new story based loosely upon the movie 'Sweetwater' where January Jones plays a young widow who takes revenge upon an entire wild west town, and in particular, a local corrupt and evil religious leader who murdered her husband and then raped her in her own home....
It doesn't take a lot of imagination to see where I plan to go with that, and unfortunately for the female protagonist in my own story, she won't be getting away from her 'religious training' quite so easily!
Meanwhile, Annabel has already started her own training as a lowly chamber maid in a house full of sadistic perverts. I am already well in to that one, so stay tuned! And I haven't forgotten about Alisha or the rest of my unfortunate leading ladies either!
Just wanted to let you all know that I am still alive and kicking and that I am presently rearranging my lifestyle so that I can focus more fully on my stories. By the way, those of you who have signed up for my newsletter will be notified automatically whenever I publish a new story or episode. So if you haven't signed up yet, please do so!
Posted: 28, January, 2016
Hi everyone, a new year and a fresh start! The dark clouds are parting and I see a light at the end of the tunnel – and more importantly, I’ve got my mojo back!
Now that a bleak chapter in my life appears to be over, it’s time to start writing new chapters for your favorite tales of sexual perversion. As I mentioned in my first blog on 4 September last year, I’ve set up an e-mail newsletter which I hope you will sign up for. All story updates and any other news will then be sent directly to your inbox as they transpire.
I’m kicking off the New Year with the second part of ‘The Principal’s Wife’ (chapters 6-11). In order to entice you to sign up for my newsletter, I’ve protected this installment, but as soon as you have signed up, I will send you the password. It is still free of charge but I am keen to see who is out there and what the general interest is. I hope this isn’t too much of an imposition for you.
If you do decide to sign up, please note that I am maintaining this site by myself, so there might be some initial teething problems. If something doesn’t work right, please send me an e-mail so that I can fix it!
Now that I am getting my nose to the grindstone again, all ongoing projects will be updated on a rotational basis (I know some of you have your own personal favorites but please be patient – there is only one of me!)
Apart from the free stories and future novels at Pink Flamingo, I also plan to start adding some story serials and novellas for sale on my website. I haven’t decided whether to create a members area or just add them on a pay as you go basis, but these tales will be darker and dirtier than I am normally allowed to publish on other sites, and will also be exclusive to customers on my e-mail listing. And if anybody has any suggestions regarding character type or storylines, I would be delighted to hear them.
Lot’s of plans and much to do, so I’d better get writing! Wishing you all (belatedly) a happy and prosperous 2016!
Posted: 11 November 2015
I received a gentle nudge from my number one fan yesterday, and I must apologize for not keeping up my weekly post. I am going through a turbulent time at the moment, and unfortunately my writing has taken a backseat because of it. I won't bore you with the details, and I am not a person to make excuses, but please be assured that I am pushing on when I can. Future posts may not come as regularly for the time being, but I fully intend to keep them up. The same goes for all my stories and my latest novel. Thank you for your patience and please keep checking back.
Posted: Friday 23 October, 2015
This little piece was inpsired by a nice little video clip on Garth Toytanen's Blog under the heading 'Medicalised Discipline and Control Within the Home, and posted on 13 October. The clip itself is called Nurse Helena Job Search Part 01 and although the dialogue is in French, it's not hard to get the gist of what's going on!
Click on this link Forced Regression to read my own take on this titillating fetish!
Posted: Friday 16 October, 2015
As well as writing about sexual bondage and humiliation, I have also started learning digital art to illustrate my stories, and I occasionally spend time browsing the internet so that I can study the work of the experts, specifically in the world of BDSM artwork. There are thousands of amazing renders out there, many of them so realistic that they could easily pass for photographs of actual people, and my hope is to one day accumulate the skills necessary to render lifelike images of my own damsels in distress.
During my wanderings through cyberspace, I have also encountered some wonderful BDSM sketches and paintings, many of which were created years before the advent of digital art technology. The great advantage of artwork - be it digitally rendered or hand drawn or painted - is that the artist has the latitude to create wildly exaggerated BDSM scenarios that would be impossible to replicate with live models.
There are plenty of masters out there, past and present, who have dazzled me with their depictions of female pain and humiliation, but my favorite has to be the late Joseph Farrel, whose work seems to pop up on nearly every BDSM artwork website.
I haven’t been able to learn much about the man himself, other than that he was a Frenchman who produced his work in the Sixties and Seventies. The majority of his scenes involve violence and extreme torture, but there are also many that depict a hapless lady (or more) in a state of undress and exposing her body to a group of leering onlookers. Farrel’s attention to detail is quite remarkable, and he takes a lot of trouble to ensure that the woman’s face is suitably contorted into an expression of shame and humiliation, while her tormentors are laughing in delight at her misery. The victims are usually well-bred ladies who are forced to degrade themselves in front of low-class people, which makes their anguish all the more titillating, especially as they look as though they are performing in front of employees or other folk that they had previously looked down upon. My readers know that this is exactly the style of psychological humiliation that I try to capture with words, and Farrel does this so beautifully with his finely crafted drawings.
Although most of his female captives are attractive, not all are young – indeed Farrel seems to have a preference for the abuse of refined and mature ladies – and he chooses not to give them all perfect hour-glass figures. Far from it in fact, as his women come in a variety of shapes and sizes just as they do in the real world. I am also intrigued by the artist’s fascination with enforced body modification, particularly breast enlargement and disfiguration, as well as swollen bellies through giant enemas or forced pregnancy.
As far as I can ascertain, there are no full-length stories featuring Farrel’s work, and each picture stands alone telling a story within itself. Certainly, all that is required is a vivid and dirty imagination, and there is enough packed into each drawing to inspire a multitude of story ideas, and indeed a few vignettes and short stories based upon his pictures such as Dark Nupital by Surtea at Understories have been posted around the net.
Posted: Friday 9 October 2015
Hi! Here's part two of 'Welcome to Redneck Country!' click here
Posted: Friday 2 October 2015
The inspiration here is – predictably – the ‘squeal like a pig’ rape scene from the 1972 thriller, Deliverance, but I only took away a vague concept of a party of city slickers getting caught up with some gun-toting country locals, and there are many other movies (Wrong Turn (2003) and The Texas Chainsaw Massacre (2003 release) spring immediately to mind) which could have triggered similar ideas. Also, as my sub-genre is ‘Maledom’, I have shifted gender for this fantasy, turning the unfortunate adventurers into a group of young women:
Click here to read 'Welcome to Redneck Country!'
Posted: Friday, 25 September 2015
I am constantly scouring the internet in search of quality fiction within the realm of my own sub-genre – that is, non-consensual maledom, humiliation, and forced behavior modification – however there doesn’t seem to be much out there that delves sufficiently into the mental and emotional mindsets of both the tormentor and the tormented that I feel is essential for setting the scene adequately. For me, the ‘what’ is almost secondary to the ‘who’ and the ‘why’, or put another way, if I am not given a sufficient introduction to the protagonists so that I know what they are feeling in every sense as their relationship unfolds, then I quickly lose interest in the story. Sadly, this is all too commonplace with much of the non-consensual/reluctance erotic literature available on the net.
So I was pleasantly surprised when I stumbled upon Garth Toyntanen’s blog at www.toyntanen.blogspot.com. Garth’s work is a lot more fine-tuned than mine, focusing on the enforced institutionalization of pretty, shapely young women, usually under the supervision of strict matrons, guardians, or doctors who, under the guise of contrived medical or mental health care, seemingly voluntary psychological experiments, or unwarranted behavioral correction of ‘wayward’ girls, take great pleasure in meting out sadistic punishments to their wretched victims.
Needless to say, these ‘patients’, ‘volunteers’ or ‘offenders’ are always perfectly healthy, intelligent, well-adjusted young women, and the fact that their captors are deliberately regressing them whilst purporting to be ‘curing’ or ‘correcting’ them, makes their plight so deliciously unfair and unnecessary. To the uninformed observer, these girls would be what they appear to be – psychotic, delusional, mentally challenged, short-sighted, lisping, stuttering, incontinent, infantile social rejects that need constant attention, restraint, and above all, discipline, with only the girls and their captors knowing the truth of the matter.
What I like most about Garth’s work is that he gets inside the minds of his characters, so we can experience the gleefully cruel gratification derived by the persecutors, and the shame and anguish of their victims. Crucially, he keeps this up even as his physical descriptions become more graphic. Knowing what the hapless wenches are going through, their futile attempts at rebellion – mercilessly put down every time – and their growing confusion followed by the gradual acceptance of their dismal fate, all serve to heighten the thrill.
Their misery and despair is constantly reinforced by verbal reminders of their predicament, its total and irreversible permanence, and the fact that they will never go on to lead normal, fulfilling lives, never get married or have children, that their planned further education at college will never happen, as indeed their prior schooling will also be forgotten, never to be used again. They are staring at a long, bleak future of abject servitude because, they are constantly told, that is all they are worthy of, and in time they will come to believe it themselves.
Caning, spanking, enemas, body restraints, plain and ugly regulation haircuts, unflattering and uncomfortable uniforms, tedious and mind-numbingly repetitive chores, forced masturbation, drug-induced brainwashing involving mental regression and sexual reorientation all abound in these delightfully depraved tales.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading Garth’s novels, and if you are into the psychological aspects of the disciplining, humiliation, incarceration and exploitation of comely young women ( and if you enjoy reading my own stories, you must be!) then I highly recommend them as an entertaining and titillating read. Click on the book covers below for individual descriptions of Garth’s titles:
Apart from his novels, Garth posts regularly to his blog at www.toyntanen.blogspot.com and if you subscribe to his e-mail listing the posts will arrive in your inbox, usually accompanied with decadently thought-provoking images such as the one below which I found particularly stimulating! There are also numerous links to like-minded blogs and websites that Garth has obviously spent years researching and gathering. Plenty of juicy material to peruse there!
But that’s not all there is to Garth Toyntanen’s ‘Institutionalized’ world. His original site, ‘The Institute’ www.theoriginalinstitute.com first created in 1996, is described by its author as ‘a work in progress and a labour of love’ and indeed it appears to be, and though I have yet to explore every page, I found plenty of images, artwork and texts pertaining to his beloved subject matter.
It’s worth mentioning here that Garth is also collaborating with the excellent period spanking and discipline artist Roger Benson, with a series of polls on his blog to promote Roger’s upcoming book as well as an annex site www.theoriginalinstitute.com/Benson showcasing his art and written work. There are some superb illustrated novellas available here, free of charge in PDF format, and well worth a read.
Garth Toyntanen’s novels, blog and websites are testimony to the passion he feels for his lascivious themes, and as the author himself puts it: “If you are an aficionado of the imposition on vulnerable young ladies of strict discipline and humiliating uniforms by the judicial application of cane, tawse, riding crop, and by less orthodox psychological means – then this is the place for you!”
Posted: Friday, 18 September, 2015
Here’s part two of my fantasy inspired by a piece of dialogue from the 2011 movie Rampart: Click here
To be continued? A lot of possibilities now that they have Carmen at their beck and call. Weekly meetings, each getting more depraved than the last, perhaps? Maybe turning her into a drug addict and then using that as leverage to get her to perform ever more degrading acts? Something to think upon.
The next one in this series was inspired by a scene from the 1972 thriller ‘Deliverance’ – you can probably guess which one!
Posted: Friday, 11 September 2015
One of the advantages of writing sex stories about domination and control is that it is a theme that pervades the very core of our society – which means that there are concepts for different scenarios everywhere I look. Every relationship, whether in marriage, the workplace, school or college, social interactions, sports, religion, government, in fact in any sphere of life, is based upon control in some way, shape or form, however subtle that it may appear to be.
Therefore, when I’m casting around for ideas, I don’t ever have to look too far. All it takes is a certain everyday situation that can be extrapolated in a sexual way, and although I obviously exaggerate my characters and their interrelationships, my fantasies probably wouldn’t be too far off what might really happen if it weren’t for social taboos (and often the law) getting in the way!
Everybody has sexual fantasies, whether they are willing to admit it or not, and many of them are stimulated by their day to day experiences, which in the case of my Maledom and Humiliation sub-genre might include the hot secretary at work, the bespectacled female doctor, the upwardly mobile businesswoman, the ditsy soap actress, the macho policewoman, the aggressive lawyer, the strict teacher, the lonely housewife, the insolent babysitter, the hardbody female athlete – the list goes on.
As I have a rather vivid – and dirty – imagination, I find myself constantly looking at life from this angle (sorry, I can’t help myself) and one of my sources of inspiration comes from the many movies I like to watch.
I’m going to launch this blog with the first of a series of vignettes based upon particular movie scenes that have stirred my creative juices over the years. This one is the opening scene of the 2011 movie Rampart in which Woody Harrelson plays a renegade cop talking to some fellow officers whilst on a break. His rookie partner is an attractive female officer and Harrelson’s character, ‘Date-Rape’ Dave Brown, verbally bullies her in front of two other male officers.
Noticing her untouched French fries, he tells her to finish them. When the female rookie complains that she doesn’t eat fries, Brown comments that she shouldn’t have ordered them in that case and then says, “Finish those fucking fries if you want to make probation.”
When the rookie unwillingly complies, Brown asks her, “Did your dad ever discipline you?”
The woman replies that she never met her father and the scene moves on from there, but the possible ramifications set up by the subtle undertones of sexual control sent my imagination into overdrive.
Click on the image above or here to read my fledging story 'Officer Carmen's Probation':
I will publish the second part of this vignette next Friday. In the meantime, if anybody has a suggestion from another movie or television show that has triggered a sexual daydream, I would love to hear about it and also try and weave a story around it.
Posted: Friday, 4 September, 2015
Hi everybody. In case you were wondering when the next Free Story updates are due, I just wanted to let you know that I am currently focusing all of my time and energy on completing my latest novel (which is already well overdue) and I am therefore putting all other projects on hold for the time being. Sigh. I wish there were more hours in the day!
Anyway, I expect to be done in the next few weeks, and after that I promise that you will be seeing a lot more of Annabel, Alisha, Jenifer, Emma and Caroline, as well as a brand new cast of unfortunate young ladies that you have yet to be introduced to!
In addition to that, I will be starting a weekly blog right here, where I shall be sharing my ideas, observations, inspirations, and discoveries on the web, all pertaining of course, to my deep fascination with themes of sexual and social control and humiliation. Please feel free to return to this page often, as this will be where all update notifications to Free Stories and any other news will be posted. Once I start producing regular blogs, I will add a free e-mail sign-up form so that they can be sent directly to your inbox if you prefer.
On top of that, I am planning a paid Members Club which will give subscribers exclusive access to stories that will remain unpublished anywhere else on the internet, and because these stories won’t have to conform to external publisher’s guidelines, I will have the freedom to push the boundaries of decency with these tales more than I am usually allowed! More about that in due course, and again, check back here for details when the time comes.
As I said, I am very time-constrained right now, but I wanted to assure you all that I haven’t stopped writing and that there is plenty more to come.
Thanks for your support and stay tuned!